more tonal range of values will give greater sense of form. less hard outlines will make it more realistic and less comic book style. its really nice. proportions are great and great details. tip of the nose and shape of the mouth are a little weaker than the rest. Hair is super nice and eyes are very impressive

Make your outlines less noticeable instead of adding dark strokes and indentations with the pencil. Better tonal values and highlights also help

Stavik, I really respect that you’re asking what to improve. That mindset already shows growth.

Your drawing has strong impact and the eye expression is powerful. The water drops are ambitious and that’s great to see. Now to improve further, focus more on value contrast. Push your darkest areas deeper and soften some transitions so the face gains more depth.
Also pay attention to proportions. The lower half of the face feels slightly compressed compared to the upper half, especially around the mouth and jaw. Double checking feature distances before shading will help a lot.
You’re very close to the next level. Stay patient, don’t rush, and keep refining. You’re on the right track 🔥

Hi Stavik

Very nice start. If you begin at the beginning of the “Pencil Drawing Masterclass” and dilligently apply your self, you will be amazed at how fast you build your artistic skills