Learner Jesse
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Revisiting my eye assingment from last week and i see some improvement
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Hi Jesse
Good improvement. It is good that you see your improvement. Draw the eye again. That is the only way you will see progress.
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Jesse, coming back to the same assignment is the best thing in this post. Most people draw it once and move on, then wonder why nothing sticks. You went back and you can see the change yourself, which means you are actually looking now. That is the skill behind all the others. Nice one, keep going.
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Good
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Nice. Good job
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Jesse, nice work, the soft blending is the strong part here. One thing to push next, your values stop a little early. Take the darkest accent down further in the deepest shadow, under the chin and where the hair meets the face, and keep it small. A few dark spots like that will make the light areas read brighter and the whole face sit forward.
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🤷♂️where can I improve?
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Hi Jesse
This is a good start. Draw your eye again and listen and watch the tutorial closely. Then compare your first and second attempts.
My guess is that you will see a great improvement. If you choose to draw the eye 4 or 5 times, you will be amazed at how well your eye will look.😊
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Keep practicing. The eyes are the most difficult part, and I make a lot of mistakes with them too.
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Accept the positive feedback and keep going , well done x
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Jesse, good start. Drawing an eye is one of the hardest first steps and you had a proper go at it. One thing to push next, your iris is shaded evenly all round, so it reads flat. In a real eye the top of the iris sits in the shadow of the upper lid and the bottom catches light. Keep the top of the iris darker and leave a little light at… Read more
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