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Louise, nice piece of homework. The thing I would push next is the darkest dark. Right now the shading sits in a comfortable middle range, so the form reads soft. Pick one spot, the deepest fold or the deepest shadow side, and take it two steps darker than feels safe. Once that one area goes properly dark, everything around it suddenly looks brighter and the whole drawing gains depth. Just that one change.

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Verry ni e

Nice