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Mountain Excercise - Your Impressions?
Good morning,
I’m attaching my mountain exercise from the initial part of the course.
Do you have any impressions or suggestions you could give me?
What are your impressions of the quality achieved?
Thanks for your help.
David, Ali and 8 others8 Comments-
Goed gedaan maar wel erg minimalistisch, kan een beetje uitgebreider vind ik.😁
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@annejoke Thanks, I just followed the exercise. I’m learning from scratch.
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Welcome, Fabio, great start, keep it up.
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Nice work Fabio. Save this drawing and compare it to your drawings 6 months from now.
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Thanks guys. I’m a bit messy and I struggle to have a clear vision. I’m drawing because it’s good for my emotional mood… but I’m finding it really hard. I hope I’ll make it.
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Another work.
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Fabio😊 this is a confident beginning. You’ve organized the elements clearly and the scene reads instantly. I can see you’re trying to create atmosphere, not just draw mountains, and that’s a great mindset to build from.
The main thing to improve is value contrast. Right now most of the mountains are very similar in tone. Try making the closest mountain darker and the far ones lighter. That will instantly create depth.
Also soften the trees in the distance and keep the foreground trees slightly darker and sharper.
You’re understanding the structure. Now it’s about pushing contrast and depth. Keep going 🔥🙌1
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