Nice

Practice makes perfect. And you are on your way!!

Very good portrait.

very good look nice in a frame

Nice job.

hair is looking good well done

The face is a little more “puffed” on the right side

Please enhance the nice small

Looks great. I think it needs more contrast

Daniel, this is a really thoughtful piece of work, and 70% is much further than you may feel when you’re looking at it closely. The details are already doing a lot of the work. Now try stepping back from the drawing and checking it from a distance. Look for the areas where the reference has its deepest darks and compare those with your drawing.… Read more

Ja cheryl heeft gelijk het mist de donkerte, verder heel goed gedaan!

if i wasnt looking at the reference i would think thats bloody good

reference sort of makes it to light when compared and the left side hair may be a bit fuller saying that i love it👍

This is a great improvement in just 2 months, I wish I will be able to get to this level of drawing 🤞

wow well done you nice picture

Very nice progress. Well done!

Your hard work has paid off! Great progress!

Daniel, you’ve made brilliant progress here. Your graphite shading is looking much more controlled, especially in the way you’re building the darker values. As you move toward hyper realism, keep paying close attention to the small transitions between light and shadow. Those subtle changes will make a big difference.

Very well done Daniel. It will help to darken the background to give the overall drawing more contrast. It will make all of the rest of your drawing stand out more.👍

yes i think Larry is right i also think more skin texture on the face although looks good to me

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Wirklich gut gemacht. 👏

In one of the video (I don’t remember which one) Ali mentioned make it less sticky by sticky it somewhere repeatedly first, like clothes

Daniel, that is such a painful way for a drawing to end, especially when Jackie is waiting for one of your portraits. The portrait itself is really impressive though, so don’t give up on it just yet.

For the torn edge, you might be able to carefully trim away any loose fibres with small scissors, then consider reinforcing the back with archival… Read more

wow not only a very good drawing but Jacky Chan was going to sign it i have watched a lot of his films when i was younger and training in martial arts always wanted to meet him alas i am now to old to be jumping around like i used to good memory’s though so for your predicament good job on portrait though👏

Is brilliant!!

This is coming along really well, Daniel. I think you’re closer than you feel. Take a break and look at it again with fresh eyes, because six hours is enough to make anyone doubt their drawing! 👀

Jawel kan best goed komen door de donkere waardes toe te voegen en de neuspunt een

beetje op te tillen !

there is no one that will see this and not know it is Jackie Chan

it is really lovely and amazing

i think when you get the skin texture in there will be no mistake that who this is 👏

Wow! Excelente trabajo. Me encanta!

Wow!

he looks older in the sketch

Bovenstaande conclusie kan ik nog niet trekken, ik vind het er heel goed uitzien zover 👊🏼

Nee hoor Daniel, geen verloren zaak, ik zou zeggen ga zo door en maak het af!

Hi Daniel, welcome to AHR Studios Community. I think your drawing is done very well. It seems like you are missing some basic technics to achieve the results you are looking for.

It might pay for you to take a look at the Pencil Drawing Masterclass. It is chucked full of artistic info on how to draw hyper realistic drawings.

If you really want…

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Wow! This is absolutely gorgeous!

Excelente! Me encanta tu dibujo Daniel. Gracias por compartirlo, espero verlo de nuevo ya finalizado.