Hi Hermann I would recommend reviewing lesson 15 in the Master Drawing Class specifically regarding gradients. This will show you how to gradually and smoothly transition from one value to another

Hi Hermann

Lens is exactly right. You can also go to the Academy course, “Pencil Drawing Masterclass”. If you start at the beginning you will learn all of the technical skills you will need to become a good, possibly a great artist.

I would definitely practice with a bunch of rough drafts and practice pencil control with dark to light lines. And practice tice with basic shapes just to get the feel of things. But your definitely on your way to greatness keep it up and dont be too hard on yourself!!

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No se que tiene que hacer lo que si te digo es que en este dibujo se nota que has practicado y se ve lo que estás aprendiendo me gusta muchísimo 😍

Hermann, in my limited experience, id probably say there isn’t enough contrast in values. It could be because your reference photo doesn’t contain enough shadows. I always either use a reference that has the darkest value and the lightest value so I can get good contrast which helps with depth. You could always alter the ref image, by editing…

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Hey Hermann, John already gave you some solid advice 👍 I’d add that you should try increasing the contrast a bit. Also, focus first on building a strong foundation get the outlines and proportions right before going deeper into shading. You’ll feel a big difference once that base is solid ✏️😊

Hola, soy la menos indicada por que también estoy de aprendizaje, pero me gustaría que me dijeras tu que ves, piensa como si no fuera tu dibujo, donde le ve el error 😉

Espero no molestarte con mi comentario ☺️

Si algo me ha quedado claro durante el curso es que pequeños arreglos marcarán la diferencia en el dibujo, te digo lo que yo haría 😁
La nariz es aparte de los ojos uno de los rasgos que definen más un rostro intentaría adaptarla al rostro luego la boca juntarla un poco a la nariz y ya por último las orejas, si te fijas en la mayoría de… Read more

Hermann, you are definitely making progress 😊
Portraits are not easy, and the fact that you’re staying with it is already a big win. There are good things happening here. The eyes have expression, and you’re beginning to understand the overall head structure. That shows improved observation and awareness compared to earlier attempts.
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If you ask me, I quite liked your style, it has a genre to it. I want to know if you have any reference image?

Hi Hermann, I get how frustrating this stage can feel. Shading is one of those things that refuses to improve overnight, and it’s completely normal to struggle with it in the beginning. The good news is that nothing in your work shows a lack of talent. What you’re missing right now are just the basics of value control and pressure control, and… Read more

Thank you so much Hermann, that really means a lot to me 😊 I’m happy my explanation helped, and I’m sure with a little practice you’ll start seeing the results you want. I’m always here if you need any guidance along the way.
Sending warm regards back to Germany and happy drawing 🎨💙

That’s a solid quick sketch, Hermann! The structure of the shark is great especially the form and flow of the body. The contrast between light and dark tones gives it a lot of power, even though it’s a quick piece. If you ever revisit it, try softening the background a little more to make the shark stand out even stronger. Really nice energy… Read more

Hi Hermann,

You started drawing three weeks ago? Why on earth would you make it so difficult for yourself by drawing a human face 😱🫢

I’m not judging you in any way by the way! I also started with a human eye and the next step was drawing an advanced portrait of a girl with water on her face. I even was disappointed that it didn’t look that well…

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