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Something is off
Hi eveeyone
I nearly have finished this one but i feel something is off. Any feesback?
Anim, Bridges and 10 others10 Comments-
Looks very nice
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looks good to me,Nicole, well done.
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love it
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Súper!👌
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Hallo Nicole, ich finde es sehr gut, bin aber auch der Meinung, dass etwas nicht so ganz stimmt. Ich denke, dass es die vordere Wange ist, die irgendwie eingefallen wirkt oder besser gesagt von der dunklen Schattierung her so wirkt. Ich würde auch noch mehr Highlights betonen, da du es im Ganzen recht gleichmäßig im Mittelwert gezeichnet hast. Ich könnte mir vorstellen, dass es dann noch schöner werden könnte.
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@catgirl0770 Hallo Heiik,
You are. absolutely right This part irritated me the most. Ik vond de highlights a bit to much. The portrait feels a bit messy. The funny is that didnt spend much time or efort in area of the neck. but that part looks very well
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Awesome work Nicole. The splash on the forehead and the bottom lip don’t feel quite right to me. 👍
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This is nicely done. I think you could smooth out some shading a bit more I think it needs more transition between some of the light and dark shadow lines some of them still look a bit harsh to me. But overall this is brilliant.
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Nicole, great job. I agree with Christina. I did the same picture back several months ago and had the same problem with getting the dark areas too dark. I went back and lightened them up some with a knead eraser. It kind of my girl a sinister look. Good job.
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Everyone is right — this drawing is incredible 😊
And remember, there is always room for improvement, no matter how good a piece is. Keep practicing, keep observing, and keep pushing yourself forward. That mindset is what truly helps you grow as an artist 🎨
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