Learner Ashok
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Look at me.
Very anxious to to do this assignment, comments are welcome.
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Great work, you’ve captured a strong gaze, and the eyes already feel expressive, which is not easy at all!
A few tips that might help you improve even further:
– Try to vary your line weight: eyelashes and eyelids look more natural when some lines are softer and others more defined.
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Looking good as always Ashok!
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Hi Ashok 😊
Strong effort. The eyes feel lively and your iris detail is nice 🙌Now push your darks a bit more, especially the pupil and upper eyelid shadow. That will add depth, Also check symmetry. One eye is slightly off
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Noice
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I can really see the expression in her eyes!
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Hair.
Well my Dear Comrades, This assignment had me pulling the hair off my head. it’s a tough one. I am having problems the highlight eraser is running smooth, can’t remove graphite as I want to, Please give suggestion. With thanks.
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Hi Ashok
Hair is tough to draw. Your hair exercise looks pretty good. Just keep practicing. Practice laying down a light 2B base then an 8B graphite powder over that, then lightly brush with clean dry brush.
Now get out your Mono Zero eraser and practice with light strokes, heavy strokes flicking strokes etc.
The further you go in the Pencil…
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Good work Ashok, hair is not easy, I can tell you spent time on it
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Precies, helemaal niet verkeerd Ashok! 👍🏼
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I haven’t done hair yet but what you’ve done looks pretty good.
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Module 5 Assignment. 41
Correction made to the lips. Photo on the Right.
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Hi Ashok
That looks better. Can you show a picture showing the chin and lips of your changed drawing
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Hi Ashok
I clicked on your changed drawing and I could see the whole head. That looks so much better. Nice change.👍
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Very good improvement! Keep getting better 🤩
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Module 5 Assignment. 41
Loomis- Head Side View.
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Good work Ashok.
The lips which are shaped well seem to be a little low, which makes the chin look very small. EZ fix.👍
This is a good exercise to play with to see how small changes affect the character of the drawing.
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Assignment No. 40 Loomis Head-Breakdown-scaled
Loomis Head-Breakdown-scaled
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Well done Ashok.
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Proportions looks great.
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It’s good
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nice
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Assignment No. 38 Glass Texture
I Trust I did a good job in this one, I found it to be very easy, until my superior look at it. Please be tough on me.(LOL)
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Hi Ashok
This looks really good. I think if you examine the swirls on the face of the reference glass ball you will find it to be a little more pronounced. Don’t be shy about increasing your pencil values. The contrast between the light and dark values really give life to an otherwise lifeless drawing.👍👍
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Hi Ashok 😊
Nice work, the form reads well and the transparency is coming through.
Since you asked for tough feedback, here it is. Your values are a bit even, push darker areas inside the glass and under the contact point to add depth. Also sharpen the main highlight edge so it feels more crisp.
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I think it looks beautiful and really good
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Nice work. Looking like you’ll be really great soon.
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Assignment No. 39
I’ve gave my best shot, Kindly give opinion.
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Hi Ashok
That looks pretty good but my guess is that if you drew the same exercise again it would become a little more refined. Practice, practice, practice.👍
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Ja het klopt wat Larry zegt maar ondertussen ziet deze er ook goed uit👊🏼
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Hi Ashok 😊
Nice work, the form and reflection are coming through well.
Try smoothing your shading and pushing the darks a bit more 👍1- View 1 reply
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Assignment No. 37
I’ve tried the Electric Erase, It works, but I need a lot of Practice to keep it under control. its a bit stubborn.
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That looks great Ashok. The Mono Zero eraser is also a really versatile tool. It takes a little practice to figure out what it will and won’t do.
My first dealing with the Mono Zero were not very successful. I started practicing by laying down various base coats on regular drawing paper,using different graphite pencils. Some with multiple layers…
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wow
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Looks great if this is your first attempt. I too struggle with electric and mono zero.
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super
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looks great .
what brushes do you use for blending if you dont mind me asking ?
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This is a very Challenging one ,with a bit of patience and Persistence I’ve got this far.my Dear Colleagues please give your critic.
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Good job Ashok, it looks complex.
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very nice
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Hi Ashok
Well done. This is a great exercise.
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Ja hoor dit ziet er goed uit!👍🏼
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wow
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Fur Texture Assignment #35
I am having problems rubbing off the Graphite, to create highlights .
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Try using an electric eraser like the Afmat. It is rechargeable and works very well to creat highlights.
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Thank you Larry , I will look into that Afmat.
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I use the graphit mono, the faber castell perfection and my faber castell electric eraser. Also the paper helps and sometime a softer pencil like 3b of 4b.
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Yes Annetje, Why?
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I see good different lengths of hair and you’ve created layers as well. Nice job
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