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  • Another redraw I needed to do.

    So this is a drawing from the simple and complex forms section 2:13. I have been working on increasing my contrast in this drawing. I tried to apply in this drawing was sharper edges and clearer value groups..which i hope i did.. please let me know how i did 😁 the 1st image is the old drawing and the 2nd is the one that I just redrew

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    Geetesh, Andreea and 13 others
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    • There is a definite difference. Really nice improvement. Very sharp contrast and you blended it beautifully and have very smooth transitions from dark to light. Very impressive! Keep it up.

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    • Thank you wilson! I was hoping I improved this definitely made me feel a little better about it.

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      • Ans

        Really a great improvement those nice dark values good job 👏

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      • Hi Pita

        What a nice improvement. It would be interesting to see how much difference it would make to the overall drawing if you added a shadow of the object on your paper.😏

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      • Nice job! Keep it up 👍

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    • Fixed landscape assignment

      So I went back on my landscape geometric assignment and redrew it. I hope i fixed what needed to be fixed haha 🙂 so i was really concentrating on contrast here and I was really struggling haha and I was trying to even out my values too.. please review 🙂 congratulations to Ali on the marriage !! So exciting!!!

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      • Looks really good!! Well done!!

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      • Ali

        This looks like a huge improvement, you can really see the effort you put into controlling your values and contrast here. The depth between the foreground trees, midground shapes, and distant mountains is much clearer now, and the atmosphere feels soft and natural. You handled the gradients in the sky and snow very nicely, it gives a calm mood… Read more

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        • Thank you so much Ali I had so much fun with this im glad I went back and corrected what needed to be fixed… the second time around makes things so much clearer for me. Thank you for your review I was curious on what you would say 🙂 and your most very welcome!!

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            • Section 2 lesson 14

              How does this look everyone? Some guidance? Thank you!!

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                great

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              • Hi Pita

                Your drawing looks wonderful. You are on your way to a great artistic adventure.😊

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              • Ali

                This is really coming along 🙌

                Your depth is working beautifully. The darker trees in front and lighter ones in the back create a nice sense of space. That’s a big win. Just separate your values a bit more. Lighten the mountains slightly or darken the front trees to boost contrast.
                You’re building real control here. Keep going. It’s… Read more

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              • nice, i like it

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            • Section 2 lesson 13

              I Have a few drawing assignments from section 2 lesson 13 any feedback would be awesome!! Thank you!!

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